User talk:Z1720
Dear Z1720. You wrote: “Please cite your sources using footnotes. There should be a reference at the end of every paragraph, minimum, since this is a WP:BLP.” Though there were about 40 footnotes and 6 external links (allowed by Scope creep), I transferred the external links to footnotes. Now there are no external links. Some references to the published biography were duplicated to a few places, and now there are references in all paragraphs, and also at the end of these paragraphs.— Preceding unsigned comment added by Si14360 (talk • contribs) 19:28, July 30, 2021 (UTC)
Dear Z1720. Thank you for your answer. Sorry, I do not understand what citations must be replaced and what citations must be new. Can you give examples what citations are wrong? I think that citations in other Wikipedia pages are similar to those in the draft. I do not understand what I need to change before resubmission.Si14360 (talk) 21:21, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
Dear Z1720. Thank you for your comments. I deleted the former references 10, 12-14, 16 for lists of publications (only two references were left). Scope creep suggested to remove the references 12-16, you suggested to remove references 10, 11, and 12 (different references). Former ref 8 (to Wiki data) was removed. As Scope creep suggested, I deleted the sentence about Wikipedia pages in other languages, and former references 19-22 we used to populate other sentences. Most sentences in early life and career now have references. May it is not needed to put a citation to every similar sentence? For example, in https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Alan_Boss there are no citations in career. I hope that editing of the sections, other than achievements, are close to the end.
On 3 August 2021, Did you know was updated with a fact from the article John Matthews (Upper Canada politician), which you recently created, substantially expanded, or brought to good article status. The fact was ... that John Matthews's pension was suspended because he was accused of leading a call for a theatre performance to play "Yankee Doodle" and "Hail, Columbia"? The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/John Matthews (Upper Canada politician). You are welcome to check how many pageviews the nominated article or articles got while on the front page (here's how, John Matthews (Upper Canada politician)), and if they received a combined total of at least 416.7 views per hour (i.e., 5,000 views in 12 hours or 10,000 in 24), the hook may be added to the statistics page. Finally, if you know of an interesting fact from another recently created article, then please feel free to suggest it on the Did you know talk page.
On 9 August 2021, Did you know was updated with a fact from the article James Hervey Price, which you recently created, substantially expanded, or brought to good article status. The fact was ... that James Hervey Price (pictured) renamed the town of Saugeen to Southampton? The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/James Hervey Price. You are welcome to check how many pageviews the nominated article or articles got while on the front page (here's how, James Hervey Price), and if they received a combined total of at least 416.7 views per hour (i.e., 5,000 views in 12 hours or 10,000 in 24), the hook may be added to the statistics page. Finally, if you know of an interesting fact from another recently created article, then please feel free to suggest it on the Did you know talk page.
Let me be the first one to congratulate you for your work on Types Riot, which got promoted a Featured article! Great work. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 11:10, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
